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Not my best piece of work. But then I aint that good at manipulating PS yet :p

Comments etc as always, are welcome :)

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It's not perfect- and I can't really tell you why, but the concept is absolutely there. I love the chimmney in the foreground with the smoke and then the lighter in contrast buildings behind it, just the rooftops are a real nice touch. The black and white certainly works though :D

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Thanks alot for the constructive comment :D

I think the reasons it's not perfect might be because a) the whole picture is infact too big and just is a bit in your face or b) because I've zoomed into the chimney a bit too much and put a lot of focus there and made it look rather big while still accepting the whole depth cue concept (if that made sence ;p)

I ain't sure, I'm still learning ^^

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:iconcristosea:
Yeah - no perfect sense there mate. I reckon it's 'cos the chimney is very much upfront and so big - proportions are not quite perfect. But keep trying it - practice makes perfect :D

But if no one is perfect, why practice? ;)

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February 2, 2006
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Feb 1, 2006, 2:19:51 PM

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